Nadima, some good detail here, particularly the explanation of the cover image and how the main coverline links to this. Go through your analysis as it is descriptive at times and you need to say why techniques have been used. E.g. don't just describe the masthead, explain colours and style - link closer to audience and genre. This could be done throughout. Contents and DPS: you need to consider the language used and again say why (link to audience/genre). Mostly correct terminology and detail used here. Contents A and B side is a reference to tapes/vinyl, try to go more in depth to show this kind of detail, also consider the house style.
Nadima, some good detail here, particularly the explanation of the cover image and how the main coverline links to this. Go through your analysis as it is descriptive at times and you need to say why techniques have been used. E.g. don't just describe the masthead, explain colours and style - link closer to audience and genre. This could be done throughout. Contents and DPS: you need to consider the language used and again say why (link to audience/genre). Mostly correct terminology and detail used here. Contents A and B side is a reference to tapes/vinyl, try to go more in depth to show this kind of detail, also consider the house style.
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