I think you have got a very clear picture and it was a good choice to use it as your cover picture; I think you could have made the picture a bit bigger maybe so it can cover the masthead a bit. I also like how you have kept it quite simple by having the colours of your text match the colours that your cover star is wearing but i think you could have done something more to make the main cover line stand out more as it is suppose to be one of the things on your front cover that stand out the most. Maybe you can make it all one bright colour like red or white with a red outline.
your cover page is really good the image is good aswell you've kept it simple but added pull quotes which will attract the reader i think the masthead is a bit too simple which could be improved you probably could add another pull quote to make it more attractive and make the reader want to read more
You have a nice clear image on your cover with a nice colour scheme. Your cover lines are clear however the font for the masthead and cover lines are too big. They take up too much space where another cover line could be added. in adding the main cover line could stand out a bit more by using brighter colours and the cover star could be bigger.
I really like the way you've used the colours on your model on your cover lines it helps the cover stand out as a whole. I think that you should've made the cover lines a different colour so that the masthead stands out. Also the product placement is a good idea but its bigger than the cover lines and it brings more attention to it rather than the cover lines which essentially could be a problem. The price should also be placed underneath the barcode as it seems more appropriate. overall a good cover!
I think you have got a very clear picture and it was a good choice to use it as your cover picture; I think you could have made the picture a bit bigger maybe so it can cover the masthead a bit. I also like how you have kept it quite simple by having the colours of your text match the colours that your cover star is wearing but i think you could have done something more to make the main cover line stand out more as it is suppose to be one of the things on your front cover that stand out the most. Maybe you can make it all one bright colour like red or white with a red outline.
ReplyDeleteyour cover page is really good the image is good aswell you've kept it simple but added pull quotes which will attract the reader i think the masthead is a bit too simple which could be improved you probably could add another pull quote to make it more attractive and make the reader want to read more
ReplyDeleteYou have a nice clear image on your cover with a nice colour scheme. Your cover lines are clear however the font for the masthead and cover lines are too big. They take up too much space where another cover line could be added. in adding the main cover line could stand out a bit more by using brighter colours and the cover star could be bigger.
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you've used the colours on your model on your cover lines it helps the cover stand out as a whole. I think that you should've made the cover lines a different colour so that the masthead stands out. Also the product placement is a good idea but its bigger than the cover lines and it brings more attention to it rather than the cover lines which essentially could be a problem. The price should also be placed underneath the barcode as it seems more appropriate.
ReplyDeleteoverall a good cover!