I think that your article is short,simple but very impactful. I like how you have used facts and figures to prove your point as this makes your point more persuasive. You have also given examples of file sharing websites and have expressed many opinions of artists and yourself. The drop-cap is eye-catching it attracts the reader to read the journalism. Your choice of image is great and it's nice how you have contrasted the colour of the background and the artist's top. The font style and font colour goes well with the look of the journalism. Lastly, the pull quote is quite powerful as you chose to write it in big, bold font and also because you chose a quote of Lady Gaga and also used her image.
This is a very well written article Nadima and you have good journalistic skills. You express your argument convincingly and you draw on relevant research. Layout is mainly strong, with an appropriate use of layers, a drop cap, pull quote, columns and header. I am not convinced about the garish colour scheme but overall this is a very good first piece of Desk Top Publishing. Vanessa
I think that your article is short,simple but very impactful. I like how you have used facts and figures to prove your point as this makes your point more persuasive. You have also given examples of file sharing websites and have expressed many opinions of artists and yourself. The drop-cap is eye-catching it attracts the reader to read the journalism. Your choice of image is great and it's nice how you have contrasted the colour of the background and the artist's top. The font style and font colour goes well with the look of the journalism. Lastly, the pull quote is quite powerful as you chose to write it in big, bold font and also because you chose a quote of Lady Gaga and also used her image.
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This is a very well written article Nadima and you have good journalistic skills. You express your argument convincingly and you draw on relevant research. Layout is mainly strong, with an appropriate use of layers, a drop cap, pull quote, columns and header. I am not convinced about the garish colour scheme but overall this is a very good first piece of Desk Top Publishing. Vanessa
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